chapter 1 part 1

March 9th, 2011, 5:53 pm

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Reply The Drama, March 9th, 2011, 5:58 pm

yay well i know this isnt the best comic but it also isnt the worst one so hope you read it and like it cuz theres more coming!

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Reply sexybeast101, March 9th, 2011, 6:14 pm

dis comci iz hot i wnt fave and sxe!1!!!!111111

srslee i gusta

Reply The Drama, March 9th, 2011, 7:33 pm

C: sexybeast-umm what? lol..??

Reply GIGA-XISBASS, March 10th, 2011, 7:22 am

CLEVER.

Reply Wow (Guest), March 17th, 2011, 10:49 am

Maybe it isn't the worst comic, but it's the worst Total Drama comic I've every seen. Their mouths are closed yet they are speaking... & their expressions don't match what they are saying. ALSO you don't even draw them...You took scenes right outta the show. LAME.

Reply The Drama, March 17th, 2011, 10:09 pm

WOW how far the haterS have gone into this world? -...- look dont comment if you dont like it ..ALSO..yea i dont draw them...where is the deal? SMACKJEEVES= comic site not a draw your comic site kk? then you are a lame show me one of your comics if you EVEN have one....and ps:you dont know how much you can hurt a person with tht kinda comments? hater

Reply Bird_Brain, July 1st, 2011, 10:35 am

Hater seems to be a term you use for anyone who doesn't like your comics. Smackjeeves might not restrict to types of comics, but it doesn't change the fact that your comic is still shit. And the whole "You can't judge me if I can't see that you can do better" is a pisspoor arguement at best. You don't have to be good at something to critique it.

The problem is not the type of webcomic; it is that you have done a terrible job of it. You can barely write or construct sentences properly, which makes it hard to read. Character's mouths don't move when they talk, and their facial expressions rarely match the tone of confusing mispelled, ungrammatical word jargon they spew. The only parts where they do, you have ripped directly from the show. Characters are bland, and the story is, for want of a better word, boring.

In other words (that won't damage your easily bruisible ego as much): your webcomic needs some work and you should be more accepting of criticism.

Reply Slicer37, July 13th, 2011, 10:39 pm

This is really bad. You obviously don't know how to spell anything, and the character's mouths don't even move while they talk. This is really fun to laugh at.

Reply The Drama, July 15th, 2011, 8:03 pm

@Bird_Brain O_O , Yeeaaah, ok.

1st.- i DO know the comic IS crap , purely crap.
then i do not like it either. so you can hate/like/love it if you want. i still won't care. why? , i don't upload this anymore. since MONTHS ago. If you didn't notice <_<.
and yeah, sorry for my grammar mistakes , i barely knew how to write in englsih.(it's not my natal lenguage (if you didn't notice)) now the part of your comment that REALLY made me laugh. was the ego part. ok . EGO?, EGO?, REALLY!?!. well that'S YOUR opinion so. i respect it, even tho i know it's completley wrong (the ego part. if you didn't notcie, again 03))
then...agh, im just 13! my artis/writer carrer is just BEGGINIG! geez i also have a life, plus this comic was full of RANDOM stuff. it's my FIRST comic man.! you know , from mistakes we learn. also NOW i DO am working on & drawing my Comics. i'll even try to beg my parents if they can get me into a animation academy. [if there's one(specially in this country -.-'')]. yeah that's all. and i DO accept critiquism , i just leaved ONE arguing comment above. ONE! that doesn't mean im the most egocentric person here! geez. did i say "shut up , hate it!, i still du know it's great!" NO.
so yeah , hope you didn't enjoy reading it , Lawl i felt like saying it since you didn't like it o3o .one more thing ,since i just visited your web page , i saw some, well , SOME , rally not so "cute" comments from your part at other couple of comics. slow down when you critique somenthing , dude. Just saying and if i'm wrong then , well you can answer with some other comment. for now:
-TheDrama
Ish out ^^
(lol did you notice how i stopped numerating the reasons after # 1. LOL.)

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